Alexis new discovery (Title in progress) -- (Author) DLchao

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Author: DLchao
Timestamp: May 4, 2014 at 5:43 AM
Content: Alright bare with me because I'm writing this on my iPhone at the middle of the night, so spelling errors may be common. This story is written from two different people's point of view meaning it is dual omniscient. I might refer Alexis to Lexi Alexa and basically any other name for Alexis, it's all the same name. When you see a ^ before a paragraph, that means I've switched characters.

Introduction,
Luke and Lexi are both tenth graders at Iron high school I'm northern Ohio. They've been best friends ever since fourth grade. They have even spent the night at each others houses and do so often. Only because the parents know how good of friends Luke and Lexi are. They basically know all of each others secrets, or do they?

Chapter One, The first day of school.

Luke woke up what seemed like the screaming of his alarm clock. He had already been missing summer. He was by all means not ready to go to school, just what seemed like yesterday he had been jumping into his pool. But that's all over and it's time to get back to school.

^"I can't believe this, again!?" Lexi said as she woke up. Her alarm clock didn't go off and now she was going to be late on the first day of school.

Quickly she put makeup and put on her skinny jeans, converse, and a light blue tank top. "Come on Alexis, your boyfriend is waiting for you outside!" Lexi's mother teased her as she quickly finished her orange juice.

^"I wonder what's taking her so long?" Luke thought to himself as he sat himself down on her porch. He had dressed in jeans, a red and white checkered dress shirt, and black Nike shoes. Lexi had opened the door in a rush and nearly passed Luke up.

"Woah woah woah, where are you going we still got thirty minutes." Luke inclined.

"But, but..." Lexi looked confused.

"Do you remember, they gave us a one hour late arrival.

^Lexi had walked into maybe class with Luke and got the usual "They are still friends?" Whispered under almost everyone ones breath. That day in math class the teacher had only been introducing herself to the class, so nothing much had happened.

Later that day they had went to language arts. "Good evening class my name is Mr. Clark. I'd like to start out with a few basic rules. First off, you may only have three bathroom passes for each quarter. "Oh no, that can't be good for me, " Lexi thought to herself.

Lexi looked over to Luke to see him chuckling about the time last year in gym when Lexi had been only a few seconds away from peeing herself. Now that she thought about it she kind of had to go at that moment. At least she'd still have two passes left.

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Author: DLchao
Timestamp: May 5, 2014 at 2:40 AM
Content: Alright, I'm going to try to rewrite my story in the way ICkaraokegirl advised me to do.

Chapter one: The end of summer.

Alexis woke up on a Sunday morning on the last week of summer. She didn't want to get up, she was so cozy in her bundle of sheets, but she would have to get up sooner or later because she was about to go to the park with her best friend, Luke.

"God, have nine years really gone by that fast?" She thought to herself. We'd been friends ever since we had met in fourth grade, now we were going to college at Ohio state university.

We got along mainly because we both loved to play video games.

But Alexis was known for her accidents, none had ever really happened in public before. They normally only happened when he made a really funny joke or they had a tickle fight, but it was nothing serious.

I took off my clothes and hopped in the shower. I began to let my mind wonder.
I remembered one incident when Luke tickled me so much that all of my pee went down to my knees, and I had no spare bottoms.

I just took off my pants and popped on a new pair of panties. He didn't seem to mind, I mean I'm pretty sure a fifteen year old boy wouldn't mind seeing a girl in just her panties anyways.

I suddenly regained focus when my mother was telling me to stop using all of the hot water. I got out of the shower and put on my jeans, a sweater and my converse shoes. I pulled up my pants to make sure my bum looked nice.

I always thought Luke was cute, and funny. No matter what he was always supportive he is just a better friend than anyone could ask for.

"Hey, are you up yet?" He texted.

"Yeah just come pick me up." I replied.

I gave one last look in the mirror and decided I looked good enough. The doorbell rang and I rushed for the door, whenever my mom answered the door she always asked him if we were dating yet. Whenever my father answered the door, he just tried to make small talk, which he not very good at.

"Hey Lexi!" Luke said with a greeting hug.

"Hey" I replied, returning the favor.

I hopped in his car and we were off. "Do you want anything to eat while we're out?"

"Of course I haven't had any breakfast this morning." I replied.

"You look gorgeous this morning, Lexi." He said without even looking at me.

"You didn't even look at me, how do you know?" I said.

"Oh please, you're always gorgeous. Luke was always a flirt and he was good at it too. I blushed a light shade of red.

We stopped at Denny's and took a booth seat. The waiter came by our table? "What will you be having today, sugar?"

"I'll have the toast and eggs and the lady will have French toast with eggs." Luke said.

"How did you know what I wanted?" I asked, already knowing the answer.

"I've known you long enough, now come on eat up we've got a long day ahead of us." He replied.

Thanks for reading my revised version of y first chapter, I know alot has changed but I felt as of it were for the better.