Baileys pull ups -- (Author) MonkeyDoodle
Baileys pull ups -- (Author) MonkeyDoodle
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Author: MonkeyDoodle
Timestamp: Jan 17, 2014 at 12:33 AM
Content: Chapter 1....Bailey's Pull ups, my first story ever. I hope to give this story unexpected twists and turns as I go along ,but I thought for chapter 1 i would start it mellow so you can get to know Bailey, the main character, and so i can hear you're feedback on what i have written so far and if you like it ,then i will continue writing. If not ,then at least i had ago Lol. Sorry in advance for any spelling and grammar mistakes.
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It was thursday and the day had begun like any other, Bailey woke up and jumped out of bed doing his normal power ranger kung fu moves in the mirror, as he giggled to himself, his Mum called to him from down stairs.
Get ready for school young man or you will be late and you don't want to be late on your 1st week back at school.
OK Mum shouted Bailey, as he began to take off his's Pjs revealing the wet soggy Pull up he had worn to bed Because of his bedwetting problem, even though Bailey was 8 years old he did not mind wearing pull ups to bed in fact he enjoyed wearing them for whatever reason he could not quite understand they just made him feel special, and as he began to note to himself how funny it felt to poke and prod the wet soggy pull up he thought to himself I wish I could wear these every day, (hmmm) maybe I could wear one to school I mean it's not like any of my friends would find out, and as the rush of excitement over the very idea of wearing his pull ups to school was exhilarating though that feeling was soon cut short by his Mum calling out again.
What are you doing up there please come on or you will be late.
Coming Mum shouted Bailey and without hesitation or thought he rushed over to his bedside drawers, as that was where he kept his pull ups, as he began to pull a fresh new pull up out of the packet, the rush of excitement came flooding back and Bailey pulled on his pull up and got his school uniform on making sure he pulled his school jumper right down, he was confident that his pull up was not on show and as he hopped down the stairs with a playful manner his Mum was standing by the door ready to go.
Come on she said with a frustrated tone we are late and you will have to have your breakfast on the way to school.
Bailey, who was at this point still buzzing with excitement and was full of confidence that wearing his pull ups to school was a great idea, and nothing could possibly go wrong ,but as Bailey and his Mum got ever closer to the school Bailey looked out of the car window, he saw the other children walking to school, this had a big effect on Bailey's confidence, this unsettling voice crept into his mind and he began to question himself, whether or not wearing a pull up to school was such a good idea. His Mum at this point noticing how quiet Bailey had become, ask.
Is everything OK darling?
Bailey snapped out of his negative thoughts about being caught wearing a pull up by his friends and replied to his Mum, yes I'm fine.
His Mum put it down to the fact it was still the first week back at school after the summer holidays,
and Bailey was still not settled in yet.
They arrived at the school, and Bailey knowing it was too late to change his mind took a big deep breath and opened the car door, but just as he was halfway getting out the car his Mum said in a stern voice.
Haven't you forgotten something.
Bailey looked back at his mum with a state of panic thinking she must have seen his pull up as he was getting out the car, Yes Mum he replied in a high tone voice and stretching his school jumper down over his trousers as much as he could.
I was only going to ask for a kiss good by, whats up with you this morning are you sure you're OK.
Bailey gave a sigh of relief and gave his Mum a kiss good by saying yes I'm OK Mum at the same time, I have to go or I will be late closing the car door and making his way through the school gates, still stretching his school jumper down over his trousers.
End of chapter 1
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Author: MonkeyDoodle
Timestamp: Jan 17, 2014 at 1:54 AM
Content:
DexxKizwizard said:
Its a great intro, keep going, I want to hear about Bailey's day in his pull up. I would suggest putting "speech marks" in when a character is speaking, this helps the reader as it makes the text flow easier and we know when someone is speaking. I like the words you use to describe the character's feelings.
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Thanks I will keep what you said in mind, yes I think his day will turn out to be quite the unexpected one he had planned Lol.
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Author: MonkeyDoodle
Timestamp: Jan 17, 2014 at 3:36 AM
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Duper said:
It has a good start, but just a side note. It sounds like Bailey is a boy. Jumpers are a type of dress as far as I know, but I could be mistaken.
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Thanks glad you like the start, a jumper over in the uk is like a sweater or a long sleeve top, Bailey is into power rangers, very boyish so not sure if he would appreciate me putting him into a dress Lol.
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Author: MonkeyDoodle
Timestamp: Jan 17, 2014 at 11:49 PM
Content: Chapter 2 Bailey's pull ups.
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Bailey soon forgot about the close call he had with his Mum in the car, as he made his way into class and once sitting down at his desk he watched the other children flooding into the classroom in their normal excited noisy fashion, and waited eagerly for his friends to arrive ,but as he waited he could not help wonder if any other children might be wearing pull ups like he was, as he pondered on this thought that exciting feeling he felt when he was leaving the house earlier on that morning with his Mum returned, as the excitement rushed through his veins he became more sensitive to the feel of his soft pull up rubbing against his thighs.
The morning soon past with normal boring school subjects and it was soon approaching morning playtime, two hours had gone by, Bailey and a few other children in the classroom who at this point were sitting with their legs crossed with desperate expressions on their face ,but as usual just as there was about to be many wet pants and puddles on the classroom floor the morning bell rang, all the children lined up tapping their little feet in desperation, Bailey held back for a moment and without any given warning he felt a warm trickling sensation throughout his undercarriage, Bailey was stunned and in disbelief at what just happened, he never meant to wet the pull up on purpose that was not his plan, it was like the pull up had subconsciously tricked him into letting go, with a Bailey's face turning a light shade of red as his pull up began to swell uncontrollably ,but it was to late Bailey had emptied his full bladder, still in disbelief he had not notice that his friends had left to go out to play leaving Bailey on his own in the classroom, he could feel the pull up bulging and a dampness around his thighs, he thought to himself.
'I' should go into the toilets and take it off before my friend's return.
But just as Bailey stood up he heard a voice saying in a surprised manner.
''Bailey'' what are you still doing here why aren't you outside playing with your friends, it was his teacher MR Quo.
Bailey, who was taken by surprise by this quickly ''flung'' himself back down on to his seat, causing the pull up to squelch under pressure furthering that damp wet soggy feeling between his legs and as MR Quo walked over, Bailey slowly looked up at MR Quo like a lost puppy, his eyes began to shimmer as tears started to form and slowly rolled down his cheeks.
MR Quo could see Bailey was upset, What on earth is a matter Bailey, asked MR Quo.
Bailey took a deep breath between each soft whimper, and muttered out the words.
''I'm'' OK MR Quo i just don't feel like going out to play today that's all, i would rather stay here, if that's OK please MR Quo can i please.
Bailey didn't want MR Quo to know the real reason why he did not go out to play.
MR Quo thought this was strange, as Bailey was usually a happy child that loved to go out and play ,but MR Quo agreed and said it was OK for Bailey to stay in the classroom, they talked for what seamed like only two minutes before the bell rang, morning play time was over and all the children once again flooded back into the classroom all hot and sweaty from running around the playground ,but Bailey had not moved from his seat the whole entire time.
Now Bailey had to sit there for another two hours, wearing his saturated pull ups ,but to make the situation worse the once warm squelchy feeling that Bailey liked, had now begun to turn cold damp and wet with a noticeable smell of urine, just as Bailey could feel himself becoming upset, he was quickly distracted by MR Quo's authoritative voice saying.
''Right'' children please get your sports bags out, and get changed ready for games in the main sports hall.
Bailey's eyes lit up, the feeling of shock horror and despair thundered it's way through his body and mind like a stampede of angry buffalo, he had forgotten it was games on Thursdays, Bailey needed to come up with a plan if he was to get away with this one, there was no way he could get undressed in front of the other children, panicking he looked around the classroom trying to think how he could get away with not doing games, the other children who at this point we're halfway through taking off their school uniforms, when he suddenly remembered.
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End of Chapter 2
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Author: MonkeyDoodle
Timestamp: Jan 18, 2014 at 6:04 PM
Content:
pamperlover said:
great story. cant wait to read more.
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Thanks, I will try and have chapter 3 updated tonight.
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Author: MonkeyDoodle
Timestamp: Jan 19, 2014 at 12:16 AM
Content: Chapter 3....... Bailey's Pull ups.
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In the rush to leave the house his mum had forgotten to pack his game's bag, this was the perfect excuse Bailey had been looking for, this way Bailey would not have to get changed because he had nothing to get changed into, thrust getting him out of doing games, Bailey raised his hand as high as he could in hope MR Quo would see, as if MR Quo did not see that would mean Bailey would have to stand up and walk over to MR Quo, Bailey really didn't want to get up out of his seat for fear of his class mates seeing his bulging saggy pull up,which by now was starting to soak through his trousers, Bailey continued holding his hand up for what felt like eternity, the other children were almost dressed and ready for games and just as Bailey was about to admit defeat knowing he would have to waddle his way over to MR Quo, who was sitting at his desk reading the back to school index, a confident voice cried out.
''MR Quo'' ''MR Quo'' Bailey's not getting changed.
it was Abby the class snitch, Bailey thought how typical, it had to be Abby ,but then he realised that Abby had actually dun him a favor by telling on him because MR Quo was now walking over towards him, Bailey took a deep breath preparing himself to tell MR Quo he had forgotten his game's bag, MR Quo kneeled down next to Bailey and asked.
'' Bailey why are you not getting changed like all the other children.
Bailey looked down towards the floor, he paused for a moment before looking back up at MR Quo and with a sheepish tone in his voice said.
''Sorry MR Quo'' we were running late this morning, my mum forgot to pack my sport's bag.
Bailey hoped and prayed this would be enough to get him out of having to do games, though he dared show it on his face. Instead, Bailey opted for the cute puppy dog look hoping MR Quo would feel sorry for him ,but MR Quo stood back up and with a firm ,but fair tone asked Bailey to stand up from where he had been sitting, once again the feeling of shock horror and despair that had thundered its way through Bailey's body earlier on that morning returned, Bailey could not hold back his tears any longer and as the sound of Bailey's sobbing and whimpering echoed throughout the classroom the other children began to giggle at bailey's despair.
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Author: MonkeyDoodle
Timestamp: Jan 19, 2014 at 2:34 AM
Content: I'm on the edge of my seat.[/QUOTE]
''Me'' ''too''........... I can't watch ><
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Author: MonkeyDoodle
Timestamp: Jan 19, 2014 at 11:58 PM
Content: Chapter 4........ Baileys pull
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Bailey buried his head into his arms with a feeling of shame, hoping the universe would open up and suck him into the empty vacuum of time and space, as Bailey started to feel a sense of comfort from this very notion, he felt a hand being placed upon his shoulder in a soft delicate way, then came a voice, it was MR Quo's voice.
''Bailey'' please talk to me, Bailey I can't help you if you don't tell me what is the matter ?
Bailey slowly removed his arms away from his face revealing to MR Quo the tear droplets on his cheeks, Bailey could not speak he was too choked up on the feeling of shame and embarrassment ,but he could see MR Quo was becoming impatient, so Bailey slowly began to slide his chair back and started to whimper once more as he looked down towards the floor.
MR Quo very quickly became aware of the signs that Bailey was showing, as MR Quo had young children himself and was all to aware of that look upon a child's face when they have had a accident in their underwear, MR Quo started to lean over trying to inspect Bailey's school trousers for any signs of wetness and with a
parental caring tone asked.
'Bailey' have you had a little accident in your underwear?
Bailey looked back up towards MR Quo with the same lost puppy expression on his face, as he had never experience this level of such shame and embarrassment before ,but Bailey knew he had to tell MR Quo the truth, and with that Bailey gave a MR Quo oneself doubting nod of his head.
Bailey's senses were overloaded with emotions with what was about to happen ,but it was futile the school was going to know that Bailey was wearing a pull up, then the thought suddenly struck him like the shock wave from a ballistic missile, the school would most lightly call his mum, Bailey once again began to whimper uncontrollably at this very thought, MR Quo gave Bailey a caring rub on his shoulder and told him it was OK and not to worry trying to be reassuring, though this did not make Bailey feel any better, MR Quo stood back up ,but once again Abby's confident little voice cried out.
''MR Quo'' ''MR Quo'' what's wrong with Bailey, why is he crying ?
MR Quo replied with a quick and sharp snap in his voice.
'Never you mind now go and line up by the door, it's time for games.
MR Quo leaned back down telling Bailey that he was going to get another teacher from next door to come and walk with him down to the main school office, where there would be spare underwear and trousers that Bailey could wear for the rest of the day, once again MR Quo tried to reassure Bailey by telling him it was OK and everyone has little accidents now and then, it was nothing to worry about.
Bailey who at this point was still sobbing gently knew at any given minute there would be another teacher coming through the classroom door to take him down to the office to get changed, thousands of thoughts went through his mind about what was going to happen, there was no running away from it, Bailey had faced the hard fact the teacher that was coming would see his saturated pull up, just as this thought was slamming it's self-against Bailey's brain a young lady walked through the door ,but Bailey had never seen this lady before, she had long flowing blond hair and youth full look upon her face as she was talking to MR Quo and smiling ,but at the same time kept looking over towards where Bailey was sitting, then MR Quo gathered up the other children and led them out of the classroom leaving Bailey and this young lady in the classroom on their own.
She smiled at Bailey and began to walk over towards him, Bailey who was still confused to whom this young lady was became even more uncomfortable with the situation, and with every step she took his heart began to beat faster and faster, this was it the moment he had been dreading ,but it was too late.
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Author: MonkeyDoodle
Timestamp: Jan 23, 2014 at 7:06 AM
Content: Sorry for the wait guys, not feeling very well at the moment, will try and get Chapter 5 updated Asap, Monkey.
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Author: MonkeyDoodle
Timestamp: Jan 23, 2014 at 4:28 PM
Content:
CodyBaby said:
Take the time needed and like I said, maybe longer chapters could get the story more interesting, your chapters are way too small at the moment...
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OK you have made your point, I will see what i can do for you to make it more interesting.
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Author: MonkeyDoodle
Timestamp: Jan 23, 2014 at 5:01 PM
Content: Might I suggest you read slower, or if you turn your screen upside down that will make it more interesting. ><
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Author: MonkeyDoodle
Timestamp: Jan 24, 2014 at 9:07 AM
Content: Chapter 5 Bailey's Pull ups.
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Bailey's heart was thumping its way through his chest as she approached him, she was still wearing her enthusiastic smile upon her youthful face and with a sympathetic tone to her voice said.
''Hi'' Bailey I'm Miss white, MR Quo has asked me to take you to the main office so we can change your underwear OK.
Suddenly a feeling of calm and peace made its way through Bailey's body, it was as if she had put a spell on him, her soft angelic voice reminded him of his mother and how she used to talk to him when he was little, Bailey liked this feeling he was experiencing, he looked up at Miss white and giving her the best puppy eyed look he could possibly conjure up, Miss white looked into Baileys big brown eyes and smiled, she took Bailey by the hand and said.
''Come'' on then sweetie let's go and change your underwear.
As Bailey stood up he felt the wet damp pull up sagging between his legs, as Miss white led Bailey out the classroom by the hand she noticed how Bailey was walking with a funny little waddle, she giggled to herself and thought it was cute, but she didn't show it, as a teacher she knew she had to remain professional, but secretly she wanted to pick Bailey up and give him a big cuddle, for Miss white this was a strange feeling, as she worked with the older children and was not used to young children, not to mention underwear wetting, but with the grace of an angel she walked Bailey down to the main office.
After what felt like a ten mile walk Miss white and Bailey arrived at the main office, Miss white kneeled down putting both her hands on his shoulders and said to him.
''Now'' Bailey I would like you to wait here for me OK and I will go and find you some new trousers and underwear for you to wear, I will be back in a minute OK sweetie.
Bailey gave a nod of his head, and as Miss white stood back up she said softly.
''good boy.
Once again that same warm calming feeling Bailey had felt earlier came flooding back, his cheeks turned rosy red in color, bailey really liked Miss white she was kind warm and nurturing, she was not scary like most other teachers, Then Bailey soon began to think about his mother and how when he was little, she would make sure he had his Favourite soft toys and the long cuddles he and his mother would have before bedtime, this made Bailey feel sad as his mother did not do this so much any more now he was bigger, Bailey was confused by these feelings it was the first time he had thought about it, as he began to whimper softly to himself over these thoughts of his mother Miss white returned she had spiderman underwear in one hand, and a pair of trousers in the other, she had a big smile upon her face as she thought the spiderman underwear she found was a good choice, but she quickly noticed how upset Bailey was, Miss white made her way over to Bailey she once again kneeled down and said.
''Aww'' sweetie, why are you crying?
Bailey turned and looked at Miss white as he cried out.
'I really.......want......my......mummy.
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End of chapter 5.
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Author: MonkeyDoodle
Timestamp: Jan 24, 2014 at 2:27 PM
Content: Thank you, glad you are enjoying the story. Monkey
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Author: MonkeyDoodle
Timestamp: Jan 25, 2014 at 11:40 PM
Content: Chapter 6 Bailey's Pull ups.
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The sight and sound of Bailey crying out for his mother was too overwhelming for Miss white, she quickly pulled Bailey into her arms and held him as if he was her own child, Miss white knew she was breaking her professional boundaries, but she could not hold back her maternal instinct to nurture Bailey, as Miss white held Bailey in her arms she delicately whispered to him.
Bailey, it's OK sweetie please don't cry.
Bailey's breathing slowed down to the rhythmic sound of Miss white's heartbeat as he nestled himself against her chest, all of his senses were being consumed by feeling of warmth, by the time that new, but yet such familiar feeling had flowed through his body, he had now stopped crying and Miss white slowly released her hold on Bailey, Miss white then said to Bailey.
''There''....that's much better, now I think it's time we get you out of those wet underpants.
Bailey stood back up and took two steps back away from Miss white, he then looked around the room nervously, Miss white giggled to herself and said in a playful manner.
''Come''on silly, we don't have all day.
Bailey began to fumble around with his top button on his school trousers like it was a coded padlock, and with every second that passed Bailey became more distressed by the situation, Miss white could see Bailey was getting himself into a right old muddle so with the same motherly tone she said to Bailey.
''Bailey sweetie, please let me help you with your top button, then once I have you can do the rest on your own.
Bailey paused for a moment, but before he could say or do anything Miss white had made her way over to him, he quickly stretched his school jumper down over his waist line, Miss white took this as a sign of Bailey's embarrassment and once again reassured him.
''Bailey it's OK I am just going to help you with your top button that's all, then you can do the rest your self, but I need you to lift up your school jumper as I can't see what I am doing, can you do that for me please?
Bailey looked up at Miss white with a cute puppy dog expression upon his face, then slowly began to lift his school jumper up and over his waist line, Miss white then calmly leaned down to undo Bailey's top button, but her eyes were drawn to Bailey's existing underwear, she quickly noted to herself the light blue colors and soft cloth like material, plus cute looking disney characters, Miss white was having trouble processing what she was seeing, it was only when Miss white looked around to the side of Bailey's underwear and saw the tear away sides she knew what she was looking at, Miss white then looked back up at Bailey, who at this point was looking very embarrassed, Miss white asked Bailey with a curious tone to her voice.
''Bailey'' sweetie, are you wearing a Nappy?
Soon as miss white said the word ''Nappy'' Bailey cringed with embarrassment, he replied to Miss white sheepishly.
'No.
Miss white knew it was, but could see that Bailey was becoming unsettled by the awkward situation, Miss white didn't want Bailey to become upset as she had formed a motherly bond with him, she thought to herself for a moment, there must be a reason why he is wearing a Nappy, but then again MR Quo didn't say anything about Bailey needing a Nappy, then she said to Bailey.
''OK'' it's not a Nappy, then we will just call them your special underwear, but I need to know sweetie why are you wearing them and do you have a new one to put on ?
Bailey shyly looked at Miss white and said.
'No.... I only need them at nighttime.
Miss white was confused by Bailey's reply she had too ask.
But Bailey if you only need them at night sweetie they why are you wearing them today at school?
Bailey shied away from Miss white's question, just as Miss white was about to ask again she heard the other children walking past the office, it was Bailey's class and MR Quo making their way back from games.
OK no matter Bailey said Miss white, she asked Bailey.
'Can you take your Nappy, I mean your special underwear off by yourself, I will be back in one second OK sweetie.
Miss white left the room though Bailey didn't know why, Bailey stood there for a few seconds trying to process what just happened then began to slip down his damp trousers, now Bailey was standing there wearing only a school jumper and his soggy Pull ups, just as he started to tear away one of the seams on the side of the pull up Miss white Re entered the office, Bailey quickly covered up his shame with his hands, Miss white once again giggled to herself as she told Bailey.
'It's OK sweetie I have see it all before, now got you a bag to put your special underwear in and a warm damp flannel so you can wipe yourself down with, OK.
Bailey nodded his head and pulled off the wet pull up putting it into the bag Miss white was holding, Miss white handed Bailey the warm dam flannel which he used to wipe himself clean with.
''There that's better said Miss white now here is your new spiderman underwear and trousers to pop on, and then you can go back to class.
Bailey did so and then made his way back to class, Miss white stayed in the office to put Baileys wet Nappy in the bin and his damp trousers in a bag to take home, afterwords Miss white sat down to have a cup of coffee, she thought about Bailey and how cute he was, she hope one day when she had children they would be as cute and funny as Bailey was.
Bailey who by now was dry and happy could not stop thinking about Miss white and the moment she held him in her arms, he really wished his mother was more like Miss white, but he went on with his day playing haply with his friends, it was now 3:30pm and home time as Bailey got into his mothers car he saw Miss white walking towards them with a bag in her hand, Bailey began to panic as Miss white came over to his mothers driver side window, hello said Miss white, you must be Bailey's mother, I'm Miss white, I helped your son change his trousers today, Ho said Bailey's mum with a surprised tone in her voice, Miss white looked through the window at Bailey who had a look of panic and despair upon his face, his mother asked Bailey what happened ?
Just before Bailey could say anything Miss white stepped in and said.
'It's fine Bailey accidentally spilt the water jug over himself at lunch time, it happened's all the time, kids will be kids, any way's here's his trousers don't worry there all clean, Bailey we will see you tomorrow.
Bailey could not believe what just happened, as he tried to gain composure, his mother asked him how his day was, in which bailey replied.
It was OK mummy, just another boring day at school.
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THE END
Hope you enjoyed the story, Monkey.
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Author: MonkeyDoodle
Timestamp: Jan 26, 2014 at 7:38 PM
Content: Thanks glad you liked it, may i ask why you say (my hardest trouble will be to meet the rules of adisc regarding stories with younger characters) ?
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Author: MonkeyDoodle
Timestamp: Jan 26, 2014 at 8:36 PM
Content: Sorry I'm confused, you say.... (I would never be physical on kids in stories or real life)
But then you go on to say...... (I would never harm any child or abuse them), but I love when they are restrained and bondaged in stories) ?
I can see why ADISC are hot on these rules and thank god they are.
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Author: MonkeyDoodle
Timestamp: Jan 26, 2014 at 10:35 PM
Content: OK true to say I like horror movies, but would never hurt anyone because of it, so I do see what you are saying, it's just unfortunately there are people out there that do hurt people and when it involves kids its the worst I can't even think about it, take Bailey's story for example most of it was about bailey being nurtured and loved even though he did something silly, I wasn't having ago at you as a person I was just trying to understand.
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Author: MonkeyDoodle
Timestamp: Jan 27, 2014 at 2:09 PM
Content: Thanks for your comments, Monkey.
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Author: MonkeyDoodle
Timestamp: Apr 6, 2014 at 7:59 PM
Content:
YAHLD said:
Well that was certainly an interesting story to read even if some of the chapters were a bit short it was still a very enjoyable story.But I noticed that there was some grammar issues you might wanna work on for any future stories but all in all I love your story ^_^
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I know I have been trying to sort the grammar out, but glad you enjoyed it.
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Author: MonkeyDoodle
Timestamp: Apr 9, 2014 at 12:06 AM
Content: Thanks I'm really glad you enjoyed it....*Happy face*
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Author: MonkeyDoodle
Timestamp: Apr 9, 2014 at 1:18 AM
Content: Your head has become my headquarters from which I shall plan to take over the world.....Mwahahaha*
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Author: MonkeyDoodle
Timestamp: Apr 11, 2014 at 12:44 AM
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bigbluehusky said:
I too want more adventures
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Well we will have to see *pup* maybe in the future.