Jack in the Land of fairies -- (Author) matt1989
Jack in the Land of fairies -- (Author) matt1989
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Author: matt1989
Timestamp: Mar 28, 2021 at 3:41 PM
Content: I tried to write stories in the past, but my spelling skills left a lot to be desired back then. Most of my stories were cringey, but there was one story I came up with that I really liked, and I hope that you all do too. Keep in mind I wrote this on my phone, but I am open to constructive criticism.
Chapter one: The girl on the tree
Jack Brooks was a 55-year-old man, or at least he was at one point. Jack was out hunting one day when he saw a pack of wolves surrounding a tree. Jack was curious, so he used the scope on his gun to see a girl stuck in the tree. Thinking fast, Jack fired his gun to scare off the wolves. Jack then approached the tree and yelled out to her, “It’s safe now!”
The young girl looked to be in her mid-twenties, had long golden hair, and wore a green dress. She jumped out of the tree, but instead of falling, a golden aura surrounded her, and she floated down. As soon as her feet touched the ground, the gold aura faded, and she collapsed from exhaustion.
“How did you do that?” Jack asked the girl, completely confused from what he just saw.
“I’m a fairy,” the girl replied, pulling back her hair to reveal her pointy ears.
“Ok, so why didn’t you fly away from those wolves?”
She looked up at Jack and tried to explain, “To fly, I have to use my life energy, what you humans call magic, and using too much life energy can leave me feeling weak. I can only fly for a short time.”
Jack sat down on a nearby stump, his head swimming with all the information he just received. He always thought that fairies were just fairy tales, stories to tell little kids, but here he was looking at one in the flesh.
The fairy got up and walked up to Jack. “Since you saved my life, I shall repay you with one wish. I shall grant whatever your heart desires.”
Jack had one wish in mind, but he was too embarrassed to admit it. The fairy just rolled her eyes and used her magic to read Jack’s mind to find out that he would like to be a little kid again. Jack didn’t have a good childhood and was forced to grow up at an early age. As he grew up, he discovered that he had a diaper fetish and learned of a community called ABDL.
”Is this really what you want?”
Jack blushed as he nodded his head, feeling rather childish already. The fairy placed her hand on Jack’s, a golden aura started to surround Jack, and he started to become younger. His gray balding hair started to grow back and turned a light brown as Jack went from his 50s back to his 40s. When he looked to be in his 30s, he started to feel the aches and pains of old age fade away. Jack felt his youthfulness come back as the now young man approached his 20s and teen years. Then his body started to grow smaller and smaller as he went from 15 to 14. His clothes turned into a pair of childish overalls as he became 5 years old again, his gun morphing into a teddy bear. Finally, his underwear became a diaper as his aging started to slow down and stop at age 3. The fairy collapsed on the ground again.
“Are you ok?” Jack asked with the voice of a child.
“I’ll be fine, sweetie. Granting your wish just took a lot out of me. Just let me rest, then we can go home.”
“I'm going to stay with you?” Jack asked, not even thinking what he would do now that he was 3-years-old.
“Well, of course, Sweetie, I’m not going to leave a 3-year-old out in the woods by himself!”
She lay up against the tree she was just stuck in, laying Jack on her lap, who snuggled into her arms. She had a calming presence about her.
“By the way, Sweetie, I don’t think I ever got your name?”
“It’s Jack,” Jack responded, starting to suck his thumb.
“Well, Jack, I'm Pixie.”
She started to stroke Jack’s head, and they took some time to rest in each other’s arms.
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Author: matt1989
Timestamp: Mar 28, 2021 at 5:45 PM
Content: Okay so rereading the story I did notice some mistakes I made
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Author: matt1989
Timestamp: Mar 30, 2021 at 12:12 PM
Content:
Fangs said:
i can see a formating error, every time you have a character talk it should start a new paragraph unless its a short sentence
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I made some changes please let me know if it looks better
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Author: matt1989
Timestamp: Apr 29, 2021 at 2:03 PM
Content: LudoErgoSum was nice enough to make me a edit of the story hopefully now I can make chapter 2 better
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Author: matt1989
Timestamp: May 1, 2021 at 11:31 PM
Content: Okay I am working on chapter 2 now says please allow me to take my time with it I thought nobody was interested in the story so but I'll have lodoergosum since he was not enough to volunteer to proofread my chapters and do necessary editing.
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Author: matt1989
Timestamp: May 18, 2021 at 12:35 PM
Content: Chapter 2 home sweet new home
Pixie woke up a few hours later with little Jack still asleep in her arms and sucking his thumb. “Come on, sweetie, it’s time to go home.”
Jack rubbed his eyes as he was waking up. “Where do you live, Momm- I mean, Pixie.”
“It’s ok to call me mommy if you like.” Pixie got up and held Jack’s hand as she led him to her village. “It’s only a short walk from here.”
“So if fairies exist, why do you hide from the world, Mommy?”
“A long time ago, we didn’t hide, but some bad people try to ensla… I mean… take us for our magic to do bad things. So we hide from the world. I was barely 100 years old back then.”
“How old are you, mommy?” Jack was a little confused. How could 100 years old be considered young?
“In human years, I would be in my late twenties or early 30s, but my real age is 1037.”
Jack was amazed at how long a fairy’s life is. Jack and Pixie walked up to a big lake with a big tree in the middle of a small island. Even though it was winter, the tree still looked like it was full of life, still having all its leaves. You could see deer and other small animals drinking from the lake, and the sun was setting behind the tree, casting small beans of light through the gaps between its branches. Fireflies danced around water that was so crystal clear you could see fish swimming around.
“Jack, I need you to hold on to me real tight, ok?”
Jack shook his head and held on as tight as his little hand could muster. Both Pixie and Jack started to glow with a gold aura around them. Then Pixie jumped into the lake, but their clothes weren’t wet from the water when they popped out on the other side. Pixie’s village looked similar to the Smurf village from the old TV show. Its buildings were made from hollowed-out mushrooms and tree stumps, and the grass had a blueish green color with multicolor flowers all over it. Pixie and Jack walked over to a giant red mushroom with two windows and a door. You could see a chimney on the roof with a little bit of smoke coming out of it. Pixie’s home looked like a small cottage, simple but elegant. There was a small, light green sofa with a rocking chair right next to it in the living room. The rocking chair looked like Pixie had just been called away from her knitting. A small, old, wood-frame TV sat in front of them. On the other side of the fireplace were two bookshelves packed with books. The other side of the room was a small, quaint kitchen.
“Well, Jack, this is your new home. I hope you like it!”
“I love it, Mommy. Your home is really pretty.”
“Well, aren’t you such a bowl full of sugar? I’m sure you’re getting hungry, so how about a quick diaper change, and then I’ll fix us some dinner.”
Pixie held out her hand, then made a diaper bag appear. She pulled out a changing mat and laid it down on the floor. Then she took off Jack’s overalls, revealing a soggy diaper. Jack felt a little embarrassed, not even knowing that he wet himself. Probably more than once. Pixie lay Jack on the mat, took off his diaper, and cleaned him with warm wet wipes. Pixie’s calming and peaceful presence relaxed Jack. He no longer felt embarrassed about being exposed to this woman he just met that day. Pixie then placed a clean diaper under Jack, took out some rash cream and baby powder, and rubbed it onto Jack’s diaper area. Then she pulled the front of his diaper up between Jack’s legs and stuck down the tapes. The diaper crinkled with every move. Pixie gave Jack’s tummy a kiss before helping him back to his feet, leaving him in just a diaper and a t-shirt.
“There we go. A clean baby is a happy baby. Here, why don’t you play with this.”
Pixie pulled some toys out of his diaper bag. Some toy cars and trucks, a handful of blocks, and a small blanket. She draped the small blanket on the floor and placed the toys on top. Then she picked Jack up and put him on the blanket. Then Pixie went to the kitchen to prepare dinner. At first, Jack didn’t think he would have much fun with his simple toys, but when his new child-like mind kicked in, he started to have fun. He used the blocks to make Ramps and bridges and ran his toy cars over them. It had been a long time since he was able to feel this little. Adult life had ripped that away from him over the years. In the kitchen, Pixie made grilled cheese sandwiches and vegetable soup. After dinner was ready, she returned to the living room to find Jack having fun with the toys she left with him. Thinking how cute he looked. Pixie called out to Jack:
“Dinner’s ready.”
Jack looked up from his toys to see Pixie standing in the doorway of the kitchen. He got up and ran to the kitchen to find a chair with a booster seat waiting for him. Pixie picked him up, placed him on the booster seat, then put a bowl and a plate on the table in front of him.
“I hope you like it. It’s my specialty.”
Jack took his spoon and took a little sip of the soup. It had a sweet taste to it but with a tangy aftertaste. Then Jack took a bite of the grilled cheese. The cheese tasted more like it was homemade rather than store-bought.
“it really good, Mommy!” Is all that Jack said before scarfing it down. He got most of it on himself.
“My, my, aren’t you such a messy eater!”
Pixie sat down at the table and ate her soup in a much more civilized manner. After dinner, Pixie helped Jack get cleaned up and changed him into a lovely new set of pajamas and a thicker night diaper.
“Ok, Sweetie, let’s see about getting you your own room. She walked to a door down the hall from the living room, and when she opened the door, it led to a storage room.
“Oh dear, this will not do!”
Pixie started to glow and turned the storage room into a bedroom. It had a toy box, a toddler bed, a changing table, a bookshelf full of books, a rocking chair, and all sorts of stuffed animals of various shapes and sizes. Pixie collapsed on the rocking chair, exhausted from using so much Life energy throughout the day.
“Mommy, are you ok?” Jack worried about Pixie.
“I’ll be fine, Sweetie. The more life energy I use, the more it takes out of me. Now how about a bedtime story before you sleep.”
Jack felt excited. No one had ever read him a bedtime story before, not even his own mother. He ran to the bookshelf, grabbed a random book from the shelf, and then ran back to Pixie. Jack hopped up on her lap. Pixie took the book from Jack and started to read from it. It was a story about knights and dragons from a land a long time ago. As Pixie made it to the end of the story, Jack fell asleep in her arms. She gently laid him in his new bed, kissed him on his forehead, and wished him good night. She left the door cracked open with the hallway light on.
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Author: matt1989
Timestamp: May 18, 2021 at 12:40 PM
Content: Thank you LudoErgoSum for editing it looked much better than the rough draft I sent you.
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Author: matt1989
Timestamp: May 25, 2021 at 5:58 AM
Content: Chapter 3 Jack's past present and future
The sun filled Jack’s new room with light as it began to rise. You could hear birds chirping outside even though all the birds should be south for the winter. Jack woke up thinking yesterday’s events were a dream, but to his surprise, he found it wasn’t. He was 3 years old again, and he had a new mommy that cared about him and is a fairy. Jack crawled out of bed, his diaper clearly needing changing, feeling really full and squishy. As Jack waddled his way down the hallway, he could smell pancakes cooking. He made his way to the kitchen to find Pixie cooking.
“Morning, Mommy.”
“Morning, Sweetie. Sleep well?”
“Yes, Mommy. I guess you could say I slept like a baby.” Pixie giggled at Jack’s little joke.
“Well, breakfast is ready, but first, I think somebody is overdue for a diaper change.”
Pixie bent down to stick a finger in the leg cuff of his diaper and found it soaked. She picked Jack up, carried him back to his bedroom, and placed him on the changing table. She strapped him down to make sure that he didn’t fall off before getting to work. She made quick work of Jack’s diaper change. At first, Jack felt embarrassed when Pixie started changing his diapers, but now it just felt natural. Jack couldn’t help but wonder whether it was fair to make Pixie take care of him like this, to intrude in her life in this way. Pixie noticed Jack was deep in thought.
“Sweetie, is everything all right?”
“Yes, but can I ask you something?”
“Yes, of course, Sweetie.”
“Do you think it was fair of me to make that wish and make you take care of me like this? You’ve been so nice to me. Nicer than most people in my old life, but I feel like I’m forcing you to do this for me!”
Jack cried as his child-like mind kicked in, and his emotions started to overwhelm him. Pixie picked him up and give him a hug to comfort him.
“Jack, you saved my life yesterday, and yes, it’s true that I only granted your wish to repay you for what you did for me, but I’m happy things ended up like this. It was so lonely living here all by myself, and I like having someone to take care of. It brings me great joy.
Pixie pulled Jack away so that she could see his face, wiping away some of his tears.
“Now I don’t want to hear any more silly thoughts like that, ok? As far as I’m concerned, you are my child, and I love you as much as any mother would.”
“Ok, mommy, I love you too.”
Pixie gave Jack another hug before getting him ready for the day. She dressed him in a blue t-shirt with a toy robot on it and blue shorts, then carried him back to the kitchen. Pixie used magic to keep the pancakes warm and fresh. She put Jack in his booster seat before giving him a plate of cut-up pancakes and a sippy cup of orange juice. Jack still felt a little upset from earlier. He still was conscious of his old life. Still, his mental and emotional maturity became that of a child’s slowly taking over as time goes by. Jack took a bite of his pancakes and started to feel better. The sweet taste chased his worries away. Pixie’s cooking was like nothing Jack had ever tasted before. You could taste the love in every bite. Jack made quick work of his breakfast. He managed to get syrup and bits of pancakes all over his face. Pixie giggled at how cute Jack looked.
“Sweety, I think we need to work on your table manners. You got more food on you than you get anything in you.”
“Sorry, Mommy, your cooking is really yummy!”
“It’s ok. I’m just happy you enjoy it.”
Pixie finished her pancakes and coffee before getting Jack and the kitchen cleaned up before moving into the living room. Jack played with some toys and watched cartoons on TV while Pixie did her knitting, but then there was a knock at the door. Pixie got up to answer it.
“Good morning, father. It’s good to see you.”
A much older-looking fairy with long gray hair and an equally long beard wearing a long green robe with gold trim came in.
“It’s good to see you too, Pixie. I’m happy to see you were unharmed yesterday.”
“Yes, thanks to him.” Pixie pointed to Jack.
“Yes, the human. May I speak with him?”
“Yes, of course, father, just keep in mind that he a child now and can be intimidated easily.”
“I understand.” the old man said as he walked in.
“Jack, sweetie, this is my father and the chief of the village.”
Jack started to feel shy and wanted to hide behind Pixie, but he tried to be an adult in this situation.
“N nice to meet you, sir.”
“My daughter told me last night that you saved her life and about your unusual wish. I would have liked it if she consulted me before inviting a human to live among us, but, considering the circumstances, I do understand. That said, as the village chief, I still need to make sure you mean us no harm before I allow you to live among us.”
“I I understand, sir.” Jack had a hard time not letting his child-like mind take over again and hide behind Pixie’s leg, but Jake did his best since he didn’t want to disappoint Pixie. Her father placed a hand on top of Jack’s head, which started to glow with a silver aura. Jack and the old man fell into a deep trance, and the old man appeared in Jack’s soul. The inside of Jack’s soul looked like a child’s playroom filled with toys, coloring books, and games. In the corner of the room were a green glowing giant pack of cigarettes and a giant beer bottle. waked up to this
“These must be his addictions from his past life. Left here, the addictions would most likely flare up again as young Jack grow up again. Let’s just get rid of these.”
With a snap of his fingers, the addictions vanished from Jack’s soul. The old man could feel the child-like nature of the room but also felt Jack’s sorrows. So the old man looked deeper into Jack’s soul to see his past. Jack’s parents weren’t always the best of people. Jack’s father took off before he could walk, and his mother resented him for it. Things didn’t get any better when his stepdad came into the picture, and his younger brother and sister were born. Jack’s stepdad unfairly punished Jack every time he stepped out of line. Things did get better after high school. Jack found his wife, but she left him when he couldn’t give her any kids, and his fetish didn’t help things, so he lived alone most of his life. Jack still had a good heart and was always willing to help people. Then the old man looked into his relationship with his daughter. An image of Pixie holding a baby took place in the center of Jack’s soul, filling in a void with something that he never truly had, a mother’s love.
“Ok, I think I’ve seen enough,” the old man said as he walked out of Jack’s soul.
Jack and the old man woke up from their trance. Jack felt a little woozy from the ordeal.
“Jack, I’m truly grateful you saved my daughter’s life, and I can see you have a good heart so you may live here and be a part of this family. Just know that you may never return to your old life if you do decide to stay here. The wish you made can’t be undone after a month, which means you would have no choice but to grow up again.”
“I understand, sir. I’m happy here, and even though I barely know Pixie, she is the nicest, most loving person I’ve ever met.”
“Well, I’m happy to hear it, and please, call me Grandpa.”
The old man smiled and tussled Jack’s hair. He treated Jack more like a small child and less like the adult he was before.
“Pixie, I love you. Feel free to bring little Jack over. I’m sure your mother will be eager to see her adopted grandson.”
“Of course, father. Maybe we’ll come over for dinner tomorrow.”
Pixie and her father hugged before Jack’s new grandpa walked out the door. She closed the door and let out a deep breath.
“He always has to be the dramatic one. Jack, are you ok? I hope he didn’t scare you too badly?”
“No, Mommy, grandpa was just looking after you and the village. I understand, but I do think I need a change.”
Jack looked down at his pants as a small wet spot appeared.
“Sorry, Mommy.”
“It’s ok, Sweetie.”
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Author: matt1989
Timestamp: Mar 16, 2022 at 10:25 PM
Content: Working on something different right now but I will get back to it eventually
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Author: matt1989
Timestamp: May 9, 2022 at 8:18 PM
Content: I was working on the next chapter but unfortunately I accidentally deleted the notebook app on my phone that was using. That mean all my notes and rough drafts are all gone. I know this story have been inactive for a while I'm going to finish the the next chapter of my life and another dimension and I'll get to work rewriting this chapter.